What have I lost
What have I lost,
I have no idea,
I have not lost anything I know of,
but I have lost something,
maybe it was a friend,
maybe it was a boyfriend,
I don't know what I have lost but it is not hear any more,
maybe it was a part of me,
but who ever really knows,
I have lost something,
and I need it to came back to me.
I have no idea,
I have not lost anything I know of,
but I have lost something,
maybe it was a friend,
maybe it was a boyfriend,
I don't know what I have lost but it is not hear any more,
maybe it was a part of me,
but who ever really knows,
I have lost something,
and I need it to came back to me.
posted by Katie @ 7:14 PM
3 Comments:
At 7:37 PM,
Monty said…
very good poem. If I may, I would like to point you in the direction of a poetry website. http://www.eliteskills.com
It is good. I sometimes post on there. People are always on to give you tips and pointers about writing poetry, and also people that you can comment on, yourself. I like it.
~Jared
http://montyblogger.blogspot.com
At 8:14 PM,
Jill said…
oooh! I REALLY like that poem! great job with it. Keep up the good work, can't wait for more.
At 8:51 PM,
Katie said…
cool thanks, you guys, i hope i will still keep wirting pomes
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